Wednesday, 26 September 2012

Focus Group Feedback


Feedback

During our focus group where we pitched our film in progress, ‘Jasper: The Bully Who Didn’t Stop’ we got great feedback that we will use to enhance our film treatment and make it more suitable to the target audience.

In the original treatment, the protagonist was an unfortunate nerd whose life is being made worse by a mischievous ghost! The group (17-18 year olds) found this concept to ‘sick’. From this we’ve learned that audiences don’t like to see good people get bullied and haunted for fun. They failed to see the comedy. Instead, they suggested that the protagonist be a bully who is then haunted as a result of Karma.

The audience also brought forward an ethical issue regarding Christianity. In the original film treatment, Nigel’s life improves when he finds God which annoys the ghost making him more determined to ruin Nigel’s life. Even though comedy isn’t funny unless it offends, the focus group felt it was best to leave out religion thus removing the turning point in Nigel’s life. The group felt that Nigel didn’t need a turning point in his tragic life for the ghost to possess him. Also they didn’t like the fact that his life doesn’t get better seeing as he’s innocent.

The group suggested that Nigel be an arrogant, mean, popular, bully who would make the mischievous ghost ‘Karma’ give Nigel a taste of his own medicine and ruin his life!

Nigel is now Brad!

Final Treatment

2nd Treatment
o Genre- Comedy, Horror because we wanted to use all the convections of a horror film and bring humour to show that some funny things in life are just messed up!

o Length- 3-5mins max!

o Characters- Brad (main character): fortunate Bully/Jock, who bullies everyone, everything was going his way until he attracts a very unfriendly ghost who after years has been tormenting him and now has finally broken Brad down spiritually and is now possessing Brad.

o Ghost, this ghost is very mischievous spirit bent on ruining people’s life, attracted to Brad because he is a bully, and treats others badly.

Storyline

o A montage in the beginning with a narration of Brad’s life of being a bully, getting all the girls he likes and then attracting a ghost which haunts him. This would last two minutes max because they will be quick clips.

o The short film would then start when Brad wakes up and he has been possessed we would show this by editing the colour of his eyes.

o The body of the film would be Brad’s life interrupted by the spirit in a Jekyll and Hyde style of manner.

· Brad’s sleep is interrupted by music, which he then angrily and possessed destroys the source of the music with a baseball bat, which attracts the attention of his mum.

· While on his way to college Brad realises that the outfit he is wearing is not what he picked out.

· Next, in class, everyone notices Brad has lost his swag! The teacher fails him and people throw paper at him as he is possessed again and does crazy shenanigans. After being angered he leaves the class.

· Brad is talking with the girl he likes but then he switches and completely messes up his chances.

· Mama asks brad to hoover. The hoover attacks brad, attracting his mother’s attention. He curses her out. This is when he decides it’s time to leave

· As he gets kicked out of his home, the ghost leaves a message on Brads mirror

· The ending would be that Brad is kicked out of college and his home and ends up in a mental home. And with this because the ghost has successfully done his job of messing up Brad’s life he moves onto his next victim.

Synopsis
 
Brad is a bully and torments others for fun and attracts the attention of a mischievous ghost.
The ghost makes it his mission to destroy Brads’ life anyway possible. The ghost is with Brad for many years and eventually breaks him down, finally spiritually/mentally weakened he gets possessed. Under the ghost’s influence Brad, now a puppet ruins his life. This then results in him being kicked out of college and home and ends up in a mental home. With this the ghost is happy with his results and moves onto his next victim.

What films inspired us
o Paranormal Activity

o Ted

o Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde

o Jennifer’s Body

Logistics and Feasibility

o In terms of equipment we would be using the normal standard equipment like a HD Video Camera with tripod


o Other equipment we would use in terms of for the actors, contact lenses (for the possession) maybe blood and fake teeth but it all depends.


o Our locations for this short film would be Brads’ house, his college, the street and woods
Where would this be screened/distributed?

o As a group we all decided that YouTube would be the best place for this to be distributed. YouTube is widely known by everyone so it would be seen by quite a lot of people

So Far...

As a group we've settled on what we think is a good film idea! We've done our first treatment and, with the focus group feedback, are working on the final treatment! Soon it'll be time to get filming on the ROAD! I'm excited. But right now, it's pre-production, pre-production, pre-production!!!

Tuesday, 25 September 2012

Our First Treatment


1st Treatment

*    Genre- Comedy, Horror because we wanted to use all the convections of a horror film and bring humour to show that some funny things in life are just messed up!

*    Length- 3-5mins max!

*    Characters- Nigel (main character): unfortunate nerd, who repels everything and everyone, including love, friendship and luck. The only things he attracts are misfortune, bullies, good grades and a very unfriendly ghost who after years has been tormenting him and now has finally broken Nigel down spiritually and is now possess Nigel.

*    Ghost, this ghost is very mischievous spirit bent on ruining people’s life, attracted to Nigel because he is an easy target. Ghost was observing kids and saw Nigel

 

Storyline

 

*    A montage in the beginning narrating the Nigel’s rubbish life of being bullied, not getting the girl he likes and just general things that have not been going right for him. This would last a minute max because they’d be really quick clips.

*    The short film would then start when Nigel wakes up and he has been possessed we would show this by editing the colour of his eyes.

*    The middle part of this would be Nigel at college and all these bad things happening some of these would be him bringing up the courage to the girl he likes but then he switches and completely messes up his chances. Another one would be he’s in class and people would be bullying him and he changes on them.

*    The ending would be that Nigel is kicked out of college and his home and ends up in a mental home. And with this because the ghost has successfully done his job of messing up Nigel’s life he moves onto his next victim.

 

 

 

Synopsis

 

Nigel is bullied and tormented and attracts the attention of a mischievous ghost. The ghost makes it his mission to destroy Nigel’s life anyway possible. However Nigel found God and his life began to get better. The ghost then tries even harder to destroy his life and makes Nigel loses faith and when he is finally spiritually weakened he gets possessed. Under the ghost’s influence Nigel, now a puppet ruins his life. This then results in him being kicked out of college and home and ends up in a mental home. With this the ghost is happy with his results and moves onto his next victim.

 

What films inspired us

 

*    Paranormal Activity

*    Ted

*    Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde

*    Jennifer’s Body

 

Logistics and Feasibility

 

*   in terms of equipment we would be using the normal standard equipment like a HD Video Camera with tripod

*   Other equipment we would use in terms of for the actors, contact lenses (for the possession) maybe blood and fake teeth but it all depends.

*   Our locations for this short film would be Nigel’s house, his college, the street and woods

 

Ethical Issues

 

*    One ethical issue that pops up in the face and may cause red flags is that some people may find the whole thing of Nigel becoming a Christian and then getting possessed. This may cause a problem with our audience and may take it the wrong way and get offended.

Where would this be screened/distributed?

 

*   As a group we all decided that YouTube would be the best place for this to be distributed. YouTube is widely known by everyone so it would be seen by quite a lot of people

Monday, 24 September 2012

Production Schedule


Greetings blogger! Here's the production schedule for our entire task! It will be fun to see if Anthony Michael Ramsay stays within the deadlines...

Wk. 1
Mon
Tues
Weds
Thurs
Fri
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 14th September
 
Creative ideas and scheduling
 
 
Wk. 2
Mon
Tues
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Thurs
Fri
Sat
Sun
 
 
 
 
 
17th September
 
Research/case studies
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Wk. 3
Mon
Tues
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24th September
 
Treatment
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Wk. 4
Mon
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5th October
 
Focus groups/pitch
 
 
Wk. 5
Mon
Tues
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15th October
 
Pre-production
 
 
 
 
 
 
Wk. 6
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12th November
 
Shooting the video
 
 
 
 
 
 
Wk. 7
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30th November
 
Editing
 
 
Wk. 8
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14th December
 
Research and planning the CD / DVD cover and advert
 
 
Wk. 9
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11th January
 
Producing the CD / DVD digipak and advert
 
Photography call sheet
 
 
Wk. 10
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11th December
 
Producing the CD / DVD digipak and advert
 
 
Wk.11
Mon
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Thurs
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21st January
 
Post-production focus groups
 
 
 
 
 
 
Wk. 12
Mon
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4th February
 
Planning and scripting the Directors Commentary and extras DVD (Evaluation)
 
 
 
 
 
 
Wk. 13
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4th March
 
Editing the Evaluation